Posted by rache on October 05, 2004 at 18:07:38:
In Reply to: Re: Kojak! Are you there? I'm ready. (NFM) posted by rache on October 05, 2004 at 17:46:17:
Stabbed (sans philosophy) by Rachael
BAM! BAM! BAM!
Dan was pissed off! He'd gotten in a fight with his girlfriend Rachael and she'd smashed his Harley with a baseball bat. It was time for some payback!
"Open up bitch! I know you're in there!" He banged on the door again, "Rachael, open the Goddamn door! I ain't gonna hurt you, I promise! I just wanna talk! I wanna make it up to you. Come on baby, I brought you a little somethin!"
Gloria slipped the bolt against her better judgment. Her roommate's boyfriend, Dan, was always making trouble. She didn't know why Rachael didn't just dump the bastard.
"Rachael's not here Dan. She took off for the weekend, went to Bellingham or someplace," She said through the gap in the barely opened doorway. "Why don't you just go home."
"I don't believe you, slut." Dan pushed against the door. "Rachael, get your ass out here!"
Gloria pushed back, "Hey! Asshole! I said she's not here! Get out of here before I call the cops!"
Dan put his shoulder to the door and knocked the young blonde out of the way. "You ain't callin' no cops! If Rachael ain't here, then somebody else is gonna pay for messin' with my ride!"
"Dan! No, just get out of here! I didn't have anything to do with you or your shit motorcycle!" Gloria turned around and started moving towards the phone in the kitchen, but Dan grabbed her by the back of her blouse, yanking her back and ripping the light cotton material.
"Let go of me, you jerk!" Gloria felt the first twitches of real fear as she realized Dan wasn't going to leave so easily. He was much larger than Gloria and his face was dark with anger.
He turned her around, digging his strong fingers into her shoulders. "Shut up! You bitches are all the same! Think you can do whatever you want cause you got a cute ass? Well, not today slut! Now sit your ass down and get what's coming to you!" Dan tossed the terrified girl onto the sofa. If Rache wasn't here, Gloria would do just as well, they were all the same to Dan.
"AHHHHH!!...Get off of me!! HELP!!" Gloria struggled, but she was no match for Dan's size and strength. "Someone, please!...HELP!!" Her screaming only seemed to infuriate him more and he backhanded her viciously.
"Let's see what you got down here!" Dan ignored Gloria's efforts to push him away. "What ya fighting for slut? Ain't nothin' in there you don't give away for free anyways!" He was sitting on her, forcing her back against the sofa, ripping her blouse down the front to expose her heavy breasts encased in a white lace bra.
Gloria was screaming for Dan to stop. "I told you to shut up girl. Or I'm really gonna have to do something you're gonna regret!" Dan pulled out a cruel looking knife and Gloria's eyes went wide with fright.
But there was nothing the poor girl could do except scream louder! "NOOOOO!! Please, someone, HELP!!!" Dan put his fingers around Gloria's throat and forced her head back, choking off her cries for help as he brandished the knife menacingly. The pretty young coed twisted and jerked herself free for a moment, she shoved at Dan trying to force the much larger man off of her, but it was wasted effort.
"You stupid cunt!" Dan lowered the knife to Gloria's quivering belly. She sucked her tummy in, trying to keep her soft flesh as far as possible from the sharp point.
His fingers found her hair and he grabbed a fistful, pulling her face down so she could watch what he was going to do. "Alright! You asked for it bitch!" Dan pushed the point smoothly into Gloria's belly button, the razor sharp blade sliced easily through skin and muscle.
Gloria gasped loudly. It felt cold at first, not really painful, but then a flash of heat started and she screamed as the realization of what she was seeing hit her. Pain lanced through her body as six inches of steel pressed inside her belly.
"Yeah!" Dan chuckled as he worked the blade back and forth in Gloria's soft tummy, "Now you got somethin' to scream about!" The wounded girl thrashed around the cold steel impaling her. Her screams of horrer ended and she fought to breath, it was as if her whole body had stopped functioning. Her mouth worked soundlessly and her fingers dug into the soft cushions of the sofa.
Gloria stared in horror, unable to tear her eyes away, or even close them against the dreadful image as Dan worked the blade, giving it an evil twist. "Hurts don't it, slut? Just like somebody smashin' your ride - a knife in the guts!"
The twisting brought her back to life, she began sobbing, unable to scream anymore. Wetness filled her eyes and she pleaded with Dan to stop. She tried to push him away, to move herself even farther back into the sofa, away from the nightmare spearing into Gloria's body like a blowtorch, but Dan only pressed harder.
"Had enough, bitch?" Dan jerked his bloody steel free from the wounded girl.
A stain of thick red blood appeared on Gloria's stomach and she gasped in fear and agony. It poured out of her, as if the knife had been a cork keeping her life trapped inside. "Damn! That felt good baby!" Dan felt himself harden with excitement as he watched Gloria press her hands against her tortured belly.
The sharp pain had started to fade, being replaced instead by a constant agonizing throb. Gloria wondered at how much blood had spilled out of her, but it had slowed quickly and she carefully felt her tummy with her gentle fingers. "Ohhhhh..." Gloria moaned pitifully. Every slight touch was another knife pressing inside her, cutting her horribly. She was bleeding inside! Dan had cut her deeply and the pain was coming like a series of terrible cramps, sending shivers through her aching body.
"We're not done yet bitch!" Dan pressed the sharp edge of the knife to Gloria's throat. The big man rubbed his bulging crotch and smiled wickedly. "Get that top off! I wanna see your money makers!" Dan licked his lips. "You ain't dyin' yet! Play nice baby and who knows, maybe I'll let you live!"
"Please Dan, I'm sorry! Anything just don't hurt me anymore!" The words came as a hoarse whisper, and her body shuddered with the painful effort of speaking them. Gloria stared at her blood covering Dan's awful knife as he moved off the girl and stood watching her with a twisted grin on his face. Gloria was too frightened and weak to protest.
Every movement was like another knife in her tummy and she screamed as Dan cut her bra loose with the crimson stained blade.
Dan smiled when he saw Gloria's beautiful firm breasts bared. "Oh yeah, baby! What do ya say we start with this one?" Gloria groaned as she watched the knife approach her tender flesh. The pain in her belly was almost forgotten as she focused on this new terror.
"OH!! Dan please, no, not there!" Gloria begged weakly, too afraid to move as her tormentor moved the knife slowly closer until the point was pressing against her pale skin. He pricked her nipple lightly with the tip.
"Yeah! Right there!" Dan grinned as he shoved the long sharp blade into the softness of Gloria's perfect breast.
It split her areola perfectly and slid swiftly into the fatty tissue. His manhood strained with arousal at the sight of Gloria's beautiful face contorted with pain. The innocent girl moaned and her body shuddered at this new invasion. "What's the matter baby? Don't you like my kisses no more?" Dan laughed as he worked the blade slowly in and out.
Gloria could feel the tip probing deeper, slicing into her and she gasped when it touched the firm muscle beneath her breast. "Oh! Not too deep! Don't wanna hurt you do we?" Dan said with mock concern. Dan held the knife in place while he rubbed his swollen crotch. "Feels good, don't it slut? You like it, I can tell!" His voice was breathless as Gloria rolled her eyes and collapsed back onto the couch..
Slowly Dan pulled the knife out of Gloria's firm breast. A crimson stain, bright against her smooth white flesh appeared and Dan stared at it in fascination.
"Ohhhhhhh..." Gloria groaned softly and cupped her agonized breast, her body jerked in a painful spasm. "You bastard!" She said breathed. The room felt suddenly cooler and Dan watched, as a large drop of blood appeared, leaking slowly down Gloria's quivering flesh.
"Shut up, bitch!" Gloria stared into Dan's lust filled eyes. "Or I'll cut your fucking throat right now!" He made a quick slashing motion with the bloody blade. "Sit up straight! Let me see how hot you are!" Gloria sobbed, sitting up the best she could. Dan swallowed hard as he looked the girl up and down. "Oh yeah, baby! You're a fine little bitch! Damn! You're so hot girl! I wanna do you all over!" Dan massaged his straining manhood through his jeans. "You ready, bitch?"
"Wait! Wait!" Gloria cried out, the words coming out with as much strength as she could manage. "I'll give you what you want! Just don't kill me Dan! Please!"
"Oh! Little girl wants to play some more?" Dan laughed as Gloria screamed in protest. Gloria cried out as Dan brought the knife down in a vicious arc aimed at the center of her chest. But he checked himself as he caught sight of the delicious red cut on Gloria's breast. Dan laughed, "Not yet baby! Oh no, we still got more fun to have first!"
And then he was suddenly pushing the tip into Gloria's other breast, grinning as she arched her back into the awful penetration. "Yeah! Take it for me sugar! How does that feel?" Dan's blade cut easily through the firm fatty tissue and he rocked the knife slowly back and forth. Gloria moaned loudly, her body shaking in protest. The deep throb in her belly, the searing cut in her left breast and now the sharp stab in her right, it was all becoming too much to bear.
Dan slipped the knife out of Gloria with a soft sucking sound. He was breathing hard, feeling the urgent need for release building inside him. Gloria hunched over, groaning in agony. She cradled her freshly wounded breast and cursed her tormentor.
"You asshole," she whispered. "You son of a bitch." Dan backed away as Gloria crawled across the floor. "I'm going to kill you." The girl moaned weakly. "I'm going to shove that knife up your ass!" Gloria lifted her arm, trying to grasp the knife Dan held just out of her desperate reach. The blood was flowing freely as her heart tried to fuel her efforts.
Dan looked down at his victim. "Stupid slut. While you're down there, how about a little blow?" Dan laughed and gave his crotch a squeeze. "Just for old times sake, huh?" Gloria made one last grab for the knife and missed. She landed hard on the floor at Dan's feet with a groan of pain and frustration. Dan grinned and sat down in a chair to watch his beautiful victim's painful death. "Yeah! You go girl! Give us a nice floor show, baby!"
Gloria writhed and twisted with pain as her body fought for it's life. Her blood pumped steadily from the gashes deep in her belly and breasts and she moaned with each little movement she made.
Dan stroked his hardness as he stared at Gloria's tormented movements. "Let it all out baby! Whoo-Hoo! Ya gotta earn the green, ain't nothin' free in this world!"
Gloria arched her back, groaning as the pain rocked her body. She felt as if the knife was still buried in her soft belly, twisting and cutting her over and over. Dan sat in the chair, pumping his fist up and down his erection while Gloria pleaded for her life.
"P-P-Please...H-Help Me...Ahhhh...It...It hurts! Oh God!!" The stricken young woman moaned, too weak to speak and Dan joined her as he felt the familiar sensation rising from his balls.
"Uhhh--Uhhhhhh...Yeahhhhh!!" Dan's orgasm erupted spraying his warm seed onto her dying body as Gloria made one last appeal for mercy, but it was silent and useless. Her arm flopped back down and her body went limp, only the gentle rise and fall of her tortured breasts told Dan that she wasn't dead.
Dan let the last drops of his sperm fall to the floor in long stringy drops. He wiped himself off on Gloria's top and wandered into the kitchen looking for a beer.
Alone, Gloria groaned weakly. She watched Dan walk away, but she was unable to find the strength to get up. All she could do was lay still and wait for death to claim her. Her body becoming colder, she couldn't feel her fingers or toes and was getting drowsy, fighting to keep her eyes opening, afraid they would never open again. But it felt so good to let them drop, embracing her in the soft darkness beyond. It wasn't so bad, just like falling asleep. She could feel her heart beat slowing inside her chest, trying to pump less and less blood through her wounded body.
Dan walked back into the room taking a swig of Budweiser as he looked at Gloria. "How you doin, kid? Was it good for you too?" He laughed as he stood there. Gloria tried to focus on her murderer but it was too difficult, she couldn't open her eyes, she didn't even want to anymore. She felt death close by and she couldn't feel anything below the throbbing pain in her belly.
"Mmm-Mmm! You got a sweet ass, girl! A little bit and I'm gonna have to have a piece for desert!" Dan knelt beside Gloria reaching out to squeeze her firm body as he spoke. "Oh yeah! Get it while it's still warm, huh?" Dan laughed and took another swallow of beer. He'd never seen a person die before it was kinda interesting.
"How you doin, slut? You don't look so hot. You dead yet?" Dan tapped Gloria with the toe of his shoe and she gave a slight moan and opened her eyes finally, one last time to stare at her murderer. "Not yet! Damn! Tough little bitch ain't ya!" Even as the words passed his lips, Dan saw Gloria's chest rise and fall one final time. A soft rasping sound escaped her throat and then she was silent forever. "Bout Goddamn time!" Dan laughed to himself. Damn! He had no idea killing someone could feel so good! Especially a hot little girl like Gloria!
He finished his beer as he contemplated what to do with the body. He ought to just leave the bitch here, he thought, be a good warning for thatslut Rachael when she got home. But then Dan started thinking he didn'twant to give his girlfriend any warning, did he? Oh no, he wanted tosurprise her with his newfound hobby! Dan looked at Gloria's beautifulface. Her eyes staring into the finality of death were a beautifulgrayish-blue, it reminded him of the sea. "How about a little boat ride,baby?"
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I don't know where this came from, it was on an old zip disk and...i have a sneaking suspicion that I wrote it for Peter...so, if that's the case...Peter, feel free to kill this, and me. I'm not putting it anyplace else anyway, I just figured I'd throw it here and maybe Sam would archive it, since I know I'll lose it.