Posted by jennifer kilmey on December 03, 2001 at 10:17:32:
In Reply to: Story: The Education of Jennifer Kilmey posted by Rodney on December 01, 2001 at 11:00:18:
Dear Rodney, I love this story!
Hope you don't mind if I ad a few thoughts.
The cops stared at the broken beauty lying on the rough cabin floor, somebody should have called E.M.S. but they just stood there, watching her gasp and writhe. "I'm glad i ki,killed th.. them"... She coughed, and thick blood trickled out of the corner of her mouth. She moaned and clutched at her shattered tits, her mutilated tummy... God, the pain! They stood and watched, and every cop had a hard on as the cute little blonde panted like a puppy bitch, her clear blue eyes full of tears. The sargent kicked her hand away from her belly, and brought his heel down on the oozing bullet hole in her soft white flesh.
"Ahh!" she cried out, a weak pitiful whimper as he ground his heel into her belly, sending waves of pain and nausea through her. "God, no... please... noo..." her voice trailed off to a whisper as the bastards watched the pretty little bitch squirm in unspeakable mortal agony. Her pretty blue eyes grew wide, wider still as the pain rose up inside her belly and cluthced at her wildly beating heart. Her heart so full of young girl hopes and dreams, now hammering out it's last! They watched impassively as the sargent continued to press his full weight into her, giving the little copkiller what she deserved.
Such an innocent face. So young...Hardly more than a child. A light sprinkling of freckles, dimpled cheeks, a real heartbreaker, this one... He ground his heel back and forth in her agony, and chuckled as she vomited a huge gobbet of mucus
and blood. Then finally, mercifully, her eyes rolled back, as though she could see eternity somewhere near the top of her pretty head... and with a final shudder, a pitiful little twitch, Jennifer left this veil of tears.