Posted by Crew on September 18, 2004 at 00:32:53:
Shadowman,
I am in the Beverly Hills Hotel as I write this post. Very expensive joint for a country boy like me. Do you believe they drove me in a limo just to get some grub at McDonald's? That's pretty good service if you ask me. I'll bet this is going to cost at least $75 a day. But this is where Halle wanted to audition so I guess I should be willing to spend twice as much as that to make her happy.
Anyhow, I tossed together a scene for her to use during the audtion. It's posted after this note to you. Too bad you aren't here, but I'll play your part and mine for now.
I'll keep you posted.
Chuck Crew
First Draft, Opening Scene
NECROS OF THE CARIBBEAN
Screenplay by Chuck Crew and Spielberg
Directed by Spielberg
Cast:
Necros - Halle Berry
Shadowman - Shadowman
Chuck Crew - Chuck Crew
FADE IN
EXT. THE COAST OF A CARIBBEAN ISLAND - DAY
A painting that moves: billowy white clouds linger on the horizon like soft cushions waiting for God to sit. A solitary pelican dives for food. Foaming surf grasps the sun-drenched sand slipping away to reveal the nude body of a young woman lying face up on the sand. This is NECROS, the most beautiful woman in the Caribbean. As the surf moves in again it lolls her body, almost picking it up. She undulates in the water and then settles as the water recedes,.
We hear jogging footsteps and the excited, panting voice of CHUCK CREW
CHUCK CREW'S VOICE
Did she just undulate?
We hear the equally excited, panting voice of SHADOWMAN
SHADOWMAN’S VOICE
Damn right she did!
Now we hear the jogging footsteps shift to an all out sprint as the surf once again plays with NECROS’ body.
We see the men race to her side.
CHUCK CREW
Is she dead?
SHADOWMAN reaches down and squeezes a breast.
SHADOWMAN
No pulse. She’s dead.
CHUCK CREW
What a shame. So young and so beautiful.
SHADOWMAN
She looks a lot like the Halle Berry doesn’t she? A stunning woman.
CHUCK CREW
Yeah, right. Say, you think we ought to get the cops in on this?
SHADOWMAN (staring at NECROS’ body)
No, I think YOU ought to go get the cops in on this. I’ll stay with her body.
SHADOWMAN tries to pick her up, but struggles with the lifeless beauty.
SHADOWMAN
Give me a hand before you go.
CHUCK CREW helps him lift NECROS. They carry her from the surf and place her in the shade of bushes twenty yards inland.
CHUCK CREW
You sure she’s dead?
He licks her breasts, nibbles a nipple.
CHUCK CREW
You’re right: no pulse.
SHADOWMAN
Told ya. Now go get the cops - and take your time.
CHUCK CREW smiles knowingly and nods.
CHUCK CREW
Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do.
He leaves.
Our musical theme, The Impossible Dream, begins.
The VOICE of RICHARD KILEY sings.
VOICE
To dream the impossible dream.....
and as the lyric is sung, Shadowman begins the realization his impossible dream.
FADE OUT
EXT. POLICE STATION - DAY
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