Posted by Shark (Im Bistra) on May 22, 2006 at 15:57:56:
hey guys Im Bistra hope you dont mind Im with new nick I just sometimes use shark as my nick since Im fan of sharks and I like to use this name in forums. I wrote some new story... It will have second part soon this is just beginning :) :
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Robbery
This is how all began:
A girl killed with gun in the middle of her back after a robbery, after trying to escape from the robbers got shot in the coridor of her flat. Shot in the back... she felt the warm bullet right in her body behind and how she was forced to the left wall... Then she felt how a small blood came out of her throat and made it way to her mouth... She slided down on the wall leaving bloody line track from her mouth. Then she dropped down on the corner between the wall and the ground... her arms and head rolled sow the robbers could see her blood comming from her mouth. Although the blood her face was showing such asleep and calm expression. The one robber stepped upon her and touched her neck to check for pulse... There was nothing. She was dead. Both robbers took off their masks... They were a man and another woman -his assistant Nancy. They rolled all the body on her back. The man grabbed her ankles and started dragging her limpy body into the room (to where she was tring to run). It was a wide big room and there was so much big space between the objects there that in the middle you could make a disco...so he dragged her in the middle of the room. She left bloody tracks from her back as he dragged her. Nancy rolled her on one side so she could check her pockets - took her wallet - the poor dead girl had only 200$ there. However she couldnt need them or use them anymore. So Nancy put the money in her bag. Then she rolled her on her other side - might be something on the other pocket. There was nothing... Just a member card for a fitness club. But the poor dead girl will never go to this club anymore... So Nancy took the fitness card too. The man was standing upon and watching how peaceful and pretty was their victim although the bloody line on her chin from the mouth. He kneed down. Took the wallet that was throwed open just on her tummy. He took from her wallet her ID card just to see her name. The name was Bistra. "How nice" he thought "nice name..." He then looked at her. She had a white skin naturally, long black hair, small tiny lips. She was dressed in indigo-purple jeans and purple top today. He took to see the small jewel on her breasts - it was a heart - those hearts that can be open. So he opened it. He saw a photo of a guy "Might be your friend?" he said to the corpse... then he took out the photo and he said "well this is golden thing and you cant wear it anymore so you dont need it..." he laughed and tore the jewel from her neck. he put it in his pocket and then he looked at her again. he touched with his hand her forehand... she was getting colder and colder already. he enjoyed the nice feeling of touching cold soft skin... his finger moved down on her face touching her eyebrows then touching the eyelids of her peacefully closed eyes, then passing through the nose then to her lips that were slightly open, put a finger between her teeth just to open them a bit more. then he moved his finger to the chin then to the neck and then reached her chest. Breathless chest - not moving up and down. He wanted then just to lift a bit her top there to touch her breasts - not too big not too small - just fine size - they could be seen through the clothes... He was just about to go there with his hand when a voice stopped him suddenly. "What are you doing damn it? the police will come every moment dont touch her too much you can leave evidence... lets see what else we can take and run out - hurry up..." it was his assistant Nancy, she already has been taken all the money she could find as well as a laptop and jewels. He came to his mind and stood up. he threw the photo of Bistra's boyfriend and the small photo felt upon her chest. He took her bracelet from her hand and then he didnt see what else to take from her so he stepped out he saw how much blood had came out from her back, making a big red spot in the orange carpet of her room. He then went to the door leaving her just like this spread on her back in the middle of her room upon this big "lake" of blood and her pocket on her tummy... before to go out he turned to her and made a blow kiss then said "Bye dear..." and then they left the flat...
(to be contunied)
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