GRAVEYARD SHIFT - featuring Carmen....(My 1st shot @ Stories)


Posted by PKJ on March 20, 2001 at 04:46:03:

The Dudes that wrote stories for my site inspired me to do THIS 'lil # that I wrote and illustrated... This is my 1st attempt... So try to be NICE ;P (hehehe)
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~~~~~G R A V E Y A R D _ S H I F T~~~~~~ By PKJ


In the middle of the Nevada desert exists a manufacturing company called STILETTO INC. They specialize in making erotic footwear for women and ever since they came up with a new design for an 8" stiletto heel for their line of high-heel boots, they've added a "graveyard shift" to increase security. It was rumoured that certain organizations in Europe were after their patented designs and would do anything to get their hands on them.

It is now 11 pm and all staff and personel have vacated the premises. Regular security are now rotating off and the two new recruits for the "graveyard shift" have arrived. Christina, a gorgeous brunette gets undressed and begins to change into her uniform. After zipping up her white stiletto heeled thigh-high boots, she inserts her two S&W chrome .45 semi-autos into the shaft of each boot. She is absolutely a sight to die for. As she slips on her long white gloves, the changing room door opens. Her partner Carmen has arrived.

"Hey... What's up Chickie???... 'Hope you brought a good video..." laughed Christina.

"Hey there Chris." replied Carmen as she tied her long beautiful blond hair into a ponytail. "God, honestly... Why do they make us wear these silly outfits?"

"Roger explained the whole strategy behind it... He thinks the most that'll happen on this shift is maybe a bunch of drunken assholes from 'Vegas will try and come over to vandalize the joint." explained Christine, "He sez that these sexy outfits will make 'em freeze in a trance, giving us enough time to smoke 'em right between the eyes."

Christina quickly draws her pistols from her boots and aims them point blank in Carmen's face, "POW... POW... If you ask me, I think the whole thing turns me on."

"HEY!!!" yelled Carmen, "Don't fuck around with those things!!!... They might go off and kill me!!!"

"Relax Girlfriend!!!.... Sorry!!!" apologized Christina, "But you know..... We all gotta go some time... That's the way I'd like to go... In a blazing shoot-out."

Carmen thought to herself, "What the hell was THAT suppose to mean?" Then shrugged it off as she zipped up her thigh-high boots and placed both her sidearms in each boot. They then proceeded towards the security office.

Christina turns to the monitors and notices an 18 wheeler backing up into the shipping area. "Shit!!!... I'll bet it's those boys from California coming in early again.... I'll go check it out."

"I'll meet you there in 10 minutes" said Carmen, "I gotta go check on the south west doors."

Christina exits the main building and heads over towards the shipping bays. She is blinded by the bright headlights beaming on her as she approaches the large truck.

"Hey you guys," greeted Christina, "Aren't you a little early for deliveries???"

Just then, four heavily armed men with fully automatic machine guns jump out from behind the rig.

"OH SHIT!!!" cried Christina as she drew her weapons from her boots.

The gunmen open fired before Christina could fire a single shot.

BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA.......

"AAAAAHHHHhhhh!!!!" screamed Christina as her tender beautiful body was being slaughtered by the blood thirsty bullets that ravaged every square inch of her beauty.... Christina's dying body jerked and danced to the symphony of gunfire as blood poured and sprayed thickly in a crimson display of death.... Her stiffening muscles tightening from the pain keeps her standing as she absorbs more bullets.

BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA- BUDDA.......

The side of her head suddenly explodes from the tremendous impact of multiple entries as grey matter splatters through the back of her skull. Her intestines dangle freely in front of her while her entire chest cavity is opened up, exposing her shredded innards... Christina's now limp body slowly falls backwards as the last magazine is emptied into her crotch...

In a matter of minutes, what use to be a beautiful, lively young temptress is now a horrifying sight of bloody carnage... All is quiet now.

Five minutes later, Carmen exits the main building having no clue as to the gruesome demise of her partner Christina.... The gunmen quickly take notice of the approaching guard from a distance.... They quickly throw their empty machine guns onto the ground and proceed to take out their hand guns.

"Hey you over there!!!" yelled Carmen, "What are you guys doing?"

As she came nearer, she noticed they were wearing ski masks... Carmen immediately drew her guns and began to fire...

BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!!

One gunman's head snapped back as Carmen continued firing... He was killed instantly... The other three began to return fire...

BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!!

"OH GOD NOOooo!!!" cried Carmen as she is struck in the knee, thigh, hip, stomach, breast and arm.... Her guns drop to the ground as she slowly falls to her knees.

The 3 remaining gunmen see that see is wounded, and cautiously walks towards her.

"N-No-ooo.... D-Don't come a-any clos-oser..." stammered Carmen as she tried to reach for her guns.

BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!!

"UHhhh...oohhh..." groaned Carmen as she is shot twice in the lower abdominal, once in the stomach, and once through her left breast just missing her weakening heart... With her last ounce of strength, she braces herself up with her arms stretched out in front of her...

"My, my.... We certainly got a tough gal over here, eh boys?" commented one of the bandits. "What are we gonna do with you Baby?"

"B-better do it-t q-quickly b-before t-the other guard-d comess." murmured Carmen in her weakened state.

"You mean that smouldering bloody mess we made over there." asked the other gunman, "M'afraid she can't help you now Sweetheart."

"C-Christi-tina....N-noooo...." whimpered Carmen.

The three gunmen take a step back away from Carmen, and aim their guns towards her already bullet riddled body...

BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!! BLAM!!!

Carmen is finally killed in an instant as the bullets slam into her breasts, neck, face, and skull... She slumps forward and lies peacefully in an expanding pool of blood. Her body convulses and slowly stops as her heart finally dies out.

The bandits drag Carmen's body over to where her dead friend Christina is lying.... They then enjoy a cigarette break while standing over the two beautifully booted bullet riddled corpses before they continue on with the rest of their operation.

A happy ending for everybody...Christina got what she wanted....Which was to go out in a blazing shoot-out, and Carmen finally figured out what Christina meant when she said, "We all gotta go some time..."

The Bandits ended up selling the blueprints for the 8" stiletto to that Manolo guy who designs womens shoes in Europe for 4.3 million pounds.


~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~

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