Posted by blue.beard on March 11, 2007 at 00:25:38:
This story wrote itself for the first page, then, alas, the muse left me hanging. I thought I'd post what I had, maybe someone can finish it for me.
Silly girl rubbed against me as I let her in my truck. She didn’t think I’d notice the needle tracks on her arm. When she picked me up in the food court, it was easy to spot her boy friend by the hamburger stand. He followed us out of the shopping center, and got in his car as I was helping her into my truck.
He was keeping it cool, following me and keeping about a quarter mile behind me. This was perfect. I led him over to the mountain road, and at a blind curve, ducked into a forester’s path and behind some bushes. I started kissing the girl to shut her up, and placed one hand behind her head, and the other on her jaw. When I pulled out from the kiss, I broke her neck before she could ask any questions. I then pushed her onto the floor, grabbed a blanket from behind the seat, and covered her up. This whole thing took about a minute and a half.
When I drove back to the highway, boy friend was no longer in sight. I turned left, back to town, and went to my farm on the other side of the city.
I parked the truck behind the house, out of sight of the highway, and went in the barn and got a wheelbarrow. After pulling her from the truck into the cart, she was covered with the blanket and wheeled into the barn. I then covered some bales of hay with the blanket, and carefully lifted her onto the makeshift bed. After removing her shoes, my knife made an easy task of removing the rest of her clothes. Stepping back, I examined my prize. She was a small girl about 110 lbs, and thin. She had tracks on both her arms, confirming my belief that she was an addict. She didn’t have any obvious signs of disease, but because of her life style, I had to wear a condom (I hate those things) when I screwed her. She was warm and limp, it was still enjoyable.
After resting a few moments, I forced a rod through her heels at the achilles tendon, and hoisted her up until she was hanging upside down. Placing a bucket under her head, I slit her throat to let the blood drain. I also tied her arms to the hoist so that they would empty too.
While she was still dripping, I thoroughly washed a hacksaw, a small bolt cutter, several knives and a couple of trays. With a knife, I cut the body from the pubis all the way to the neck, being careful to cut through the muscles, and not nicking the organs. I used the bolt cutter to remove the breastbone, and then proceeded to remove all the internal organs. The lungs and the digestive system all went in a bucket. I saved the heart, the liver, and the kidneys. The vagina is mostly skin, and may be good deep fried. The uterus is a heavy muscle and was saved for soup.
On second thought, when I looked at those tracks on her arms, I threw the innards I had saved away.